Ebony
  • Birthday August 25th, 1988
  • Gender Male
  • Country Canada

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    • Keiryu Reminds me a lot of those Jetpack Stormtroopers A.K.A Jumptroopers.

      I am not sure where you are going with the face but i don't see a lot of "Human" in it. Or maybe you where talking about the actual build and less about the facial features.

      If you meant the build then i think it looks good.Having them possess a mechanical emotionless face but moving/acting/looking bodywise like a human gives them a great design.

      Reminds me of the Nurses in Silent Hill 2. Who have a creepy yet strangely appealing appearance to them. Then again it might just be me and my weird fetishes...
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    • Keiryu I like how the artist added a background character. The hole seemed perfect for it. Other then that i have to say. Pretty nice job on that background. You can really see it as a war scenario. With everyone in the background firing. Especialy in those holes that are in the wall.
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    • ℟angßøømeՐ Not sure if this right. Last word seems to be "Gloria" meaning "Glory".
    • Keiryu Looks fairly nice. I would suggest adding a few bullets coming in his direction. Or some enemy coming out of the hole. Give the shield some use. Other then that it looks quite nice. Still a bit ad odds with the size of the gun but that's just personal opinion.

      As for the words on his chest. The only one i can actually read is "Nah" which if i recall was russian slang for "F**k it" Might be wrong though my russian ain't the best...
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    • Keiryu A bit weird how the Ebony who in his picture looks just badass looks so hilarious in this it really proves how the art can change everything in a character still you already said you still need to make him less catroony and i agree there.

      Also like the details on the weapons but i still say focus more on the characters and less on the weapons. A "Tool" should never define that character.
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    • Keiryu One for all. All for one.

      Seems like a good start personaly i would go with a battlefield mostly because a shot up underground compound/bunker makes it seem like a gun was used for most of it and only one of them has a gun. Plus in a battlefield you can add more variations like maybe a pile of corpses in the back to show how they just defeated an army on their own or something like that.
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    • Keiryu Wait the gun now has powers...Seems kind of unfair to the other members of that group...Other than that i still think the sword looks a bit bland compared to that gun...
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    • Keiryu That sword for having all those amazing powers just seems to suck compared to the gun the diffrence in detail is amazing.

      Still looks very nice especialy like the background really gives that dark alley feel.